Sunday 28 February 2016

My secret place

"This is mine this  is mine my secret spot". My  secret spot is public.  It is at the  Edendale train track is like dark brown like chocolate ,and there is gold overgrown grass. I go there to sit and daydream. There are light green ,new leaved shrubs that shake when train go past it smells like it just has been planted.

There is also a pile of gravel  at my secret place. Sometimes I go there to watch see the sunrise or sunset. I feel like I don't want to go home.

2 comments:

  1. What a great story Jacob! You have really done well to describe the setting with using your describing words. - Mrs C

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  2. Oh my god that's the best tonal gradation painting ever!! Chad

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